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my nails scrap across the back of your neck.
i’m struggling to take my last breaths.
my head collides with the mirror;
it’s like the one that i used to look into
when i tried to convince myself i was good enough for you.
i can see my petrified reflection in the pieces that scatter
across this abandoned house.
no one can hear my muffled screams.
you lean down and whisper things into my ear
“this is the way it has to end. just know, i’ve always loved you.”
my eyes widen at the sight of my own blood smeared across these walls.
i give in to the fear.
my golden curls are crushed by your unbearable weight.
your fingers wrap around my neck.
the last seconds are painful
then i find peace.
a peace that you will never know.

two hours later a detective flashes his camera over my exposed body,
analyzing what was lost.
“damn. what a shame. what a good girl.”

the crime.
the evidence.
the countdown.

the conviction.
"the jury has reached a verdict. guilty as sin."
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silverluminosity Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Student Photographer
i like this a lot.
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RachelJohnsonPhotos Featured By Owner May 13, 2009   Photographer
SO DEREK.
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the-joker-93 Featured By Owner May 14, 2009
LOL! I KNOWW!
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Erlebnisse Featured By Owner May 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
oh, so amazing.
(and I love the author's comments too!)
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the-joker-93 Featured By Owner May 13, 2009
THANKS! for the fav too :D
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Erlebnisse Featured By Owner May 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
ofcourse. :]
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miss-momentum Featured By Owner May 12, 2009
...are you trying to tell me something?

;]

i like this. it's different, unique. special. :heart:
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the-joker-93 Featured By Owner May 12, 2009
yeah erin, i was murdered.
lol :D

and thanks! for the fav too!
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miss-momentum Featured By Owner May 14, 2009
;] loveeee you.
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becbecmuffin Featured By Owner May 12, 2009  Student Writer
This is gorgeous. :heart:
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the-joker-93 Featured By Owner May 12, 2009
thank you! thanks for the fav too!
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becbecmuffin Featured By Owner May 12, 2009  Student Writer
you're welcome you're welcome
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